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The two bar charts compare the average price (USD) of flights operated by three different airlines from City H to four cities in Africa, in October and December 2017.

主體段分段方法：一圖一段

開頭段

The bar charts compare the ticket prices charged by three airlines based in City H for flights to four African cities (Cairo, Lagos, Nairobi, and Cape Town) in October and December of 2017.

概述段

Overall, all three airlinesincreased their prices, with flights to Cape Townconsistently charging the highestin both months.Among them, Airline Cremained the priciest optionto all four cities,whileAirline Awas the most economical choice.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- ABC價(jià)格都上升

-三種航班去Cape Town的價(jià)格都最高

- C兩個(gè)月份收費(fèi)都最高，A兩個(gè)月份收費(fèi)都最低

Body paragraph 1

In October, Airline C’s fare to Cape Townwas the highestat $470,closely followed byits fees for Cairo at $450 and Lagos at $420.Conversely, only $400 was charged for Nairobi. Airline Bfollowed a similar pattern, with Cape Townremaining the most expensive destination($400) and Nairobithe cheapest($330). Airline A,by contrast,offered the most economical flightsto all four cities, with faresranging from$280to$350.

思路要點(diǎn)：October

- Airline C：去Cape Town的航班收費(fèi)最高($470)，Cairo第二($450)，Lagos 第三($420)，Nairobi最低僅為$400

- Airline B：和Airline B相同的收費(fèi)排名，Cape Town收費(fèi)依舊最高($400)、Nairobi最低($330)

- Airline A：四個(gè)城市的航班收費(fèi)最低，區(qū)間范圍是$280(Nairobi)到$350(Cape Town)

Body paragraph 2

Two months later, all three airlinessaw a rise in their prices toall four destinations. Airline C’s flight to Cape Townsaw the most pronounced increase to$650, with its fees for the remaining three citiesgrowing byroughly $150 in December.The other two airlines experienced similar growth: Airline B's faresrose slightlyto between $450 and $550,whereasAirline A's prices remained the lowest,staying below$500 for each destination.

思路要點(diǎn)：December

- 三家航司去四個(gè)地方的機(jī)票費(fèi)都漲價(jià)了

- Airline C：到Cape Town機(jī)票價(jià)格上漲最顯著，達(dá)到$650，到其他三個(gè)地方的機(jī)票費(fèi)用上漲了大約$150

- Airline A和Airline B增幅類似

- Airline B票價(jià)上漲到$450至$550之間，但Airline A的票價(jià)依舊最低，都在$500以下

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